Showing posts with label Young Asgard. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Young Asgard. Show all posts

Sunday, November 25, 2012

Drunken Shenanigans

The perspective is still off. x_x This is the most complicated thing I've ever drawn and it's STILL NOT RIGHT.

Anyways, seventeen-year-old Loki has issues with alcohol, since he accidentally burned down an alfar village showing off with fire magic while drunk. Odin has no such inhibitions, and is not paying much mind to Loki trying to be the voice of reason.

Odin, this is why Loki caused the end of the world, because nobody ever listens to him when he's actually being reasonable!

Saturday, November 10, 2012

Family

Small, but with huge paws that suggested he would be growing into a wolf of substantial size, the wolf cub snarled at Tyr.

Tyr didn't even bother to draw his sword, catching the pup around the neck when it lunged at him and wrestling it to the ground. It thrashed furiously, twisting around to try to bite him. It was far stronger than it looked; Tŷr was impressed. He expected that was its Jotun blood as he managed to tie its muzzle shut with a scrap of rope. The pup glared at him, working its jaws to try to get around the rope.

"Let him go," came a high, childlike voice, and he turned to see a girl with black skin on one side and pure white skin on the other. She stood in the doorway, a tall boy with black hair standing next to her with one hand on her shoulder.

"That's our brother you're taking away," said the boy, voice even with controlled fury.
Tŷr laughed, scooping the pup up with a hand under its middle. It attempted to bite him, but muzzled as it was, it failed. "Don't be ridiculous. It’s a wolf cub."

"He's a shapeshifter," the little girl said.

From behind them appeared Frey, green cloak wrapped tight about him. "This place is freezing," he said, and then indulged in a few Vanir curse words. Tyr glared at him. "Watch your mouth around the children."

"Why? They're just Jotun brats."

“I have a name,” the boy interjected.

Tŷr nodded. “Do share.”

“Jormungand.” The boy jutted his chin out defiantly.

“Who cares?” Frey snarled. “Let’s just get them out of here and get out of this accursed land.”

Frey wasn't usually this angry, even about Jotnar. But he was when people had wronged him. Tyr noted the very raw circular marking on Frey's arm and grinned. "You bit him, did you?" Good. He deserved it.

The boy gave an almost imperceptible nod, still holding tight to the shoulder of his sister. "What are you here for?"

"We're here for you," Tyr said.

Thor appeared from around the back of the house. “Are you two finished here or still bickering like old women?”

“Where’s Father?” the boy demanded.

“With your mother. Come, we’re taking you to Asgard,” Thor said.

Tŷr noticed the familiar light of magic shining from the boy’s clenched fist. “And what if we don’t want to go?” Jormungand asked.

Thor dropped his hand to his hammer. “Don’t make this difficult.”

Jormungand’s eyes narrowed and his other hand lit up, a small ball of green fire spilling through his fingers. Tŷr dropped the wolf cub in the snow, and closed his fist around his sword. He didn’t expect a fight; likely the sight of the Æsir truly ready to fight the boy would make Jormungand back down.

“You can’t win this fight,” Tŷr warned.

“Then don’t take my family.” Jorgi hurled the rune with as much ferocity as he could muster, which turned out to be quite a lot. Tŷr barely had time to dodge it before Jorgi had summoned another.

His little sister was a Kvasiran too, it appeared, as when Frey tried to grab her from behind and take her hostage, she sent a cerulean rune exploding in his face. With a howl he fell back. Shaking his head in exasperation, Tŷr dodged the next rune Jormungand tossed and closed in. Jorgi had speed on his side, but now, all of his attention taken up by fending off Tŷr, he left himself open for attack from behind.

Thor pinned Jorgi’s arms behind his back, eliciting a shout from the boy. Tŷr tossed Thor the rope and went after the little death Kvasiran still holding Frey at bay.

It was only a matter of minutes before both children were still spitting mad, but safely restrained and unable to cause any more substantial damage to the Æsir. Jorgi actually bared fangs at Tŷr, who laughed and ruffled his hair as he walked past him back to Thor’s goat cart, leaving Frey and Thor to actually take care of the three children.

“Tŷr, let me go,” Loki snarled, yanking on the leather cord binding him to the side of the cart. “You have no right to do this.”

“Be quiet, Loki, or I’ll have to gag you too.” Tŷr coaxed Tanngrisnir and Tanngnjóstr to their feet, back turned to the trickster god. “It was the Allfather’s orders.”

“To come and terrorize an innocent family?”

Tŷr didn’t answer. Thor coming around the corner of the house herding two children ahead of him and holding a wolf cub in his hand spoke for itself.

“Thor! Tell me what’s going on, now.”

Thor stopped and opened his mouth to form words, but Frey interrupted him. “Don’t tell the traitor anything, Thor.”

“I’m a traitor now, am I?” Loki asked acidly.

“No,” Thor said. “It’s not you.”

“It’s three innocent children and their mother.”

Thor closed his eyes and pushed past Loki, taking his position at the head of the cart and tucking Fenris, who was still a very small puppy, into his pocket. Frey dragged Jormungand and the girl into the back, next to Angrboda, who lay unconscious. Thor leaned over to untie his uncle’s hands before he clucked his tongue to Tann and Josty. “Do as you please, Loki.”

Loki glared murder at Thor before hooking a leg over the side of the cart and joining the rest. (Shockingly enough it accommodated all of those passengers without feeling overcrowded.) “I’m coming. If my family’s to have a trial, I’m going to be there.”

Thor sighed, obviously not approving of Loki’s decision. But Loki was already firmly situated and the look on his face told them all there was to be no budging him. “Suit yourself,” Tŷr said, and Tanngrisnir and Tanngnjóstr stamped their feet and took off running.
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Father did not have time to see Loki’s family right away, which left Angrboda in the dungeons creating a cold snap when she wasn’t begging to see her children, the wolf on a leash, and the girl and Jormungand in two small cells near the servants’ section of Gladsheim, until such time that the Allfather could see them.
Tŷr felt sorry for Jormungand; the boy had tried so hard and was rewarded with nothing but isolation and captivity. So on the third day of the little family’s stay in Asgard, he made time to go see the boy.

Jormungand sat slumped against the back wall, barely bothering to look up when Tŷr came in. Feeling a wave of sympathy, Tŷr crouched next to him. “Chin up. Where’s the boy who tried to fight off three Æsir singlehandedly and almost won?”

Jorgi turned to look at Tŷr, bright green eyes blazing. Pointedly lifting his chin, he spat venom in Tŷr’s face. Tŷr jerked backwards in a shout, rubbing at his eyes with the back of his sleeve.

Damn. Kid had spirit. Blinking the last of his vision back, Tŷr caught a satisfied smirk on the boy’s face. “Bite the hand that feeds you, eh?” he said, ruefully examining his sizzling sleeve. That venom was going to ruin his favorite tunic. He felt no anger towards the boy; no. Anger was for those cowardly in battle, or those who used underhanded tricks to get what they wanted. One like Jorgi, who had and was still giving his all to the fight, deserved only respect.

Jorgi replied quietly, “You’ve given me nothing.”

The words stung him, oddly enough. Tŷr looked down, letting out a chuckle. “Yeah. I guess I haven’t.”
I felt like writing angst, and I've recently fallen back in love with Jormungand/Jorgi. I used to hate him because he felt too perfect for me. Polite, compassionate, gentlemanly, etc etc etc. Bleh. His only flaw was that he has a subtle flare for vigilantism and a tendency to ignore direct orders when it suits him.

Then writing up a character sheet for his most dedicated fangirl, Ninja, I discovered how to fix him. I intensified his positive ideal (which is Love) with a focus on his family and specifically his little sister, Hela. Now his character arc after being taken by the Aesir traces a path that leads to him eventually becoming obsessed with Thor and his destiny to kill Thor at the end of the Nine Worlds. =3 I like him much better sans sanity. ^^

Sunday, September 2, 2012

Finishing novels

"Oh my gosh the world is ending and it's beautiful." ~Midnight Aster

That's what my friend said about finishing novels. And for me? It's not the triumphant "YAHOOOO I finished a NOVEL! WOOT!" (I don't think anything in the world could make me say "YAHOO" and "WOOT", but that's kind of beside the point.)

Anyways, I wasn't triumphant when I finished. I was crying.

I spent the month of July furiously scribbling plot ideas, character sheets, outlines. I spent August caught up in the glorious whirlwind of words and dialogue and adventure. I went from Asgard to Jotunheim and back again with my characters. I watched Runi die at the hands of a vicious warlord and I saw Loki attempt to sacrifice his life for his brother.

I fell in love with a cranky prince, a struggling young king coming to grips with his new responsibilities, and a snarky trickster who's far more loyal and self-sacrificing than he would ever let you know.

And then it ended. Only fifteen minutes before midnight on the last day of August, I typed six innocuous letters.

T H E E N D

The king was home, the trickster safe, the prince ... still cranky, but working on it.

I had to say goodbye.

It was hard. It was so much more difficult than I thought it would be to give up this story. It was a happy ending, with an overflow of snark and a lot of drunk Norsemen. But it was over. And it felt so terribly final. 

I was crying when I wrote those final letters. I hugged my characters and wailed that I would miss them. Odin was at least sympathetic. Loki said, "Quill, you planned an entire series for us. Get a grip."

(As a side note, I didn't win NaNo, but I discount that because HAY. I finished a novel.)

I moped all day yesterday after finishing because I was finished because nothing I could think of to write was Loki. I had a steampunk story I needed to work on, but I picked it up and put it down again because it wasn't Treacherous Ice.

This is Rayle.
Then late that night I was considering a few wacky ideas I'd had way back to compete with Aster's sparkly vampires of space. I remembered Rayle--eight years old, blue fluffy hair, adorable big blue eyes, pointed ears, the ability to become invisible. She's also cocky beyond belief, obnoxious, unbalanced, a kleptomaniac, and has a history of murder. 

The picture is Rayle. Knowing her, she's probably hiding a knife behind her back. 

 She tormented poor Caesar for a while--called him pathetic, threatened him with a knife, annoyed him--and then decided that Saminique Taro was all hers. She follows him around everywhere now.

Ideas are flooding in.

The point of this long rambly post is to say that 1, finishing novels isn't quite all it's cracked up to be and 2, I have a new project. Yay.

Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Excerpt of Treacherous Ice, Chapter Seven


I sagged against the wall, letting my arms and shoulders support me for a moment. My back blazed with pain, a solid mass of raw and bleeding flesh. Sven chuckled darkly and I heard the whip clatter as he threw it to the floor. “We’re done for now.”

Breathing heavy, I shifted my weight from my arms to my feet again, trying to relieve the ache in my shoulders. Several hours? Or had it been longer?

“What in the Nine Worlds do you want?” I asked through gritted teeth.

A light but icy-cold finger brushed across my back and I arched away from it, biting back a cry. “I want this.” The rich, deep voice was familiar. It took me a moment to place it, but once I had, it all came rushing back to me. Kassoq Aricson. In the octagon.

“What?”

“I want you bloodied. I want you beaten, and broken. A pitiful shade of what you once were.” Again the light touch trailed across my back, lingering in the most open wounds.

I pressed against the wall, away from him. “Stop--”

A low chuckle. “How much does the king of Asgard care for you, son of Farbauti, son of Aric?”

Son of Aric.

Kassoq Aricson.

“By the Norns, don't tell me we're related,” I breathed.

“You’re my brother’s son, the half-elf hybrid who managed to land himself a spot as the blood brother of Asgard’s new king. You’ll be very useful indeed.”

“Odin would never put me before Asgard.” I said it believing the words completely. Odin cared about Asgard more than anything else. “He won’t give that up for me.” He’s already plotted to betray me.

“He’ll come. He’s a king, after all, and he can’t let someone possibly die. Not on his watch.”

I twisted around to see him, chains rattling. Kassoq stood about a foot back, smirking. “What if he does come? Then what? You want to fight an Æsir, a son of Bor? Forgotten what happened to Ymir, Kassoq?”

“He’s weak and exhausted from getting here. And I have a hostage.” Kassoq leaned in with a grin. “There’s no way for you to win this war, son of Laufey.”

“He won’t come,” I rasped, and fell back against the wall.

“He will.” With that parting jab, Kassoq left the dungeons.
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An excerpt from chapter seven of Treacherous Ice, ladies and gentlemen. -bows-
Admittedly, I drew the picture before I wrote this little scene, and it isn't quite accurate, but it still captures how Loki feels at the moment. 

Saturday, August 4, 2012

Quill has been lax about updates

Sorry guys. D:

So. Camp NaNoWriMo, which is NaNoWriMo in July and August, just started today.

Basically, I will not be writing anything except Young Asgard, which was renamed Treacherous Ice for a month. So, until NaNo ends... have drabbles. :P Short 'stories' of exactly 100 words. I'm doing the 100 story challenge with them... sort of. Off and on, really.
1. Introduction
You mean you don’t recognize me right off? The signature flame-red hair? The scarred lips?

If we were face to face right now I’d be giving you a bitter smile.

I am Ulfsfadir, Laevisi, Loptr, Ville, Liesmith, Silvertongue. I am Laufeyson and Farbautison and Odin’s brother and parent of Jormungand, Fenris, Hela, Narvi, Ali, and Sleipnir. I am husband of the late Angrboda, and of Sigyn. I am Jotun and Æsir and elf. I am the Trickster. The thief of Brisingamen and Idun’s apples and the cutter of Sif’s hair. I am the Sly God.

In short?

I am Loki.

2. Complicated
“So, Odin, you slaughter frost giants regularly and yet you call a little runty Jotun brother?” Hrungnir’s grin is sly as he takes another swig of wine. Freya the Beautiful stands behind him, ready to refill his drinking horn. The air around him warps with the instinctual magic of Jotuns, creating a bubble of frigid air around him.

I recline on a chair at the table, smirking at Odin’s unusual houseguest. “Here I am known as Son of Laufey, Hrungnir.”

“That clears everythin’ up,” Hrungnir slurs.

Odin smiles and says, “Yes, Loki is my brother. How that came about is…complicated.”

3. Making History
Odin met me in Yggdrasil, the space between worlds, and I became his traveling companion. Months passed, and eventually I helped him retrieve Idun and her apples. In return, he made me his blood brother, and one of the Æsir--one of the gods.

“You know, I am half Jotun, brother,” I whisper to Odin as we approach Bifrost and Asgard’s gate.

“I know.” He smiles. “But you are also an elf, and my brother.”

Not even Silvertongue can argue with that. I step into Asgard, the first Jotun to enter as a friend of Odin, and I make history.

4. Rivalry
The Æsir don’t compete in the same fields, instead striving to become the best at their chosen professions. Odin, god of wisdom. Bragi, of poesy. Thor, of thunder and strength. Freya, of love and beauty.

I happened to be better at lies than any of them were in their own fields (save Odin; he would always be more powerful than I).

And so I become the rival of every Æsir as they struggle to keep me in check, struggle to be as powerful at their talents as I was. They have to keep Ragnarok from happening.

I laugh at them.

Thursday, August 2, 2012

Chronicles of a Camper, Day 2

Day 2
Loki's feeling more cooperative today. I think he's just spitefully happy at the research problems I'm having. High fantasy shouldn't have to be researched! But I wanted an authentic Norse-feeling culture, so I had to research Norse dwellings, Norse funerals, and mess around with Icelandic dictionaries. Sigh. Stop laughing at my pain, Loki.

In which the epic journey of blood, sweat, tears, and overly spiteful characters continues.

MORE STATS.
Wordcount goal:3226
Wordcount Today:Seeing as I counted wrong yesterday, I think it's 936...
Wordcount of All Time: 2650
Words Remaining:47,540
Greatest Achievement:Surviving today...?
Greatest Annoyance:Historical 'accuracies' and researching them. x.X

So yeah! Today was fun! My outline told me I had to kill the king of the Aesir today, so I set about doing that, and then realized I'd probably need a funeral as well. So, being the kind of person who wants to be faithful to the original myths and the culture that spawned them, I merrily went off to research Norse funerals.

A noble and worthy goal, you must be saying.

I'd be inclined to agree, except I then discovered Norse funeral traditions are not exactly appropriate to put into a YA book. So I had to tweak the funeral a little (my excuse is there aren't enough men in Asgard at the current time to perform these unmentionable...rituals...).

I suceeded in figuring out how I wanted to portray this G-rated funeral at last and was happyfied!

Then I realized I also needed to figure out what Gladsheim, home of the king of the Aesir, looked like.

X.X

WILL THE RESEARCH NEVER END? I'm writing High Fantasy, here, people, I did this specifically to get AWAY from the research.

And this is NaNo, anyways. Research is for July!

But it's too early to cheat on descriptions and such, so off I trundled to look that up...and found nothing useful on the subject of kings' dwellings.

Sigh, okay, I'll just make it an ordinary dwelling, plus all the trappings, right? ...Right. Yep. That's working so far, and I see no need to change it...yet. I'm sure any Norse geeks who read my novel will be horrified at my information, but that's what September's for...editing those mistakes. =P

My apologies for said rant. Loki's laughing his head off at me. You have permission to do so as well if you wish.

Have an excerpt. Said excerpt is totally random and makes little sense out of context and isn't even particularly witty or funny, but whatever.
I saw Honir leaning on the wall outside the door, looking at the floor. Unable to summon a snarky question, I walked up to him and asked, “How is he?”

“Fading quickly.” Honir looked up. “I didn’t expect you to care enough to come. I thought you’d have run off by now.”

I shrugged. “I like to keep people on their toes.”

“He asked for you.”

“Rúni told me.”

“Don’t tell me you actually felt obligated to come see him.”

“…Yes. I did.” I didn’t expect Honir to really understand--the prince had probably never met a day of hardship in his life (and strenuous training with a sword doesn’t count in my humble opinion)--but I had never known either of my parents, and Bor had been a mentor to me. (Not that I took half of his advice, but it’s the thought that counts.)

Besides, I suspected that Odin would find out somehow that Bor had asked for me as well, and if I didn’t go see his father, later Odin would be sighing and talking about how it would have been nice if his father had gotten to see me one last time before he died. Which would (besides make me feel marginally guilty) be awkward. So it was best for me to be here.

Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Chronicles of a Camper, Day 1

Day 1
The characters are already rebelling--or at least Loki is. I knew it wasn't a good idea to tell him what was going to happen to him in chapter seven. He's been drunk and especially caustic for the past three days. And now when we actually have to start writing, he refuses to cooperate at all. 

Camp NaNoWriMo, day one, campers! In which we embark on an epic journey of blood, sweat, tears, and uncooperative characters.

Okay, I stole the idea for such a blog post from my good friend ninjadragon99 on the OYAN forums. Her blog is A Writer And Her Dragons and she too is doing Camp NaNoWriMo. ^^ Actually, she's even doing a Norse story like me--the story of Loki and how he accidentally sent the Aesir to the moon at the worst time possible. It's called Silvertongue and it's quite cool.

Stats! I love stats! They're so crisp and factual. Takes all the imagination out of stuff, and we don't want too much imagination running around. 'Tis dangerous, precious!
Wordcount goal:1613
Wordcount Today:1974
Wordcount of All Time: 1974
Words Remaining:48,387
Greatest Achievement:...Do I get points for not strangling Loki...?
Greatest Annoyance:Loki. He's a pain


 Ninth Twilight, Book One: Treacherous Ice
Three princes of Asgard.

A warlord of Jotunheim.

Odin's father is dead. The Aesir are still young, a fledgling group of gods vulnerable to attack. And Odin's the one who has to take up his father's mantle, rule Asgard, hold them together. And across the Worlds in Jotunheim, the frost giants mobilize under the power-hungry Kassoq, who is bent on conquering Asgard.

Odin and his two brothers Loki and Honir must stop Kassoq. But the frost giant warlord is already playing on their fears and doubts, tearing at their loyalty…


Yerp, this is what I'm writing. Previously I called it Young Asgard, but Treacherous Ice fits better.  Plus, new synopsis. And I have an outline and all sorts of cool stuffs for it.

Have an excerpt.
The younger man stopped a few feet away. “You’re on Æsir land, frost giant.”

I smirked, lounging on the slope of the grassy hill and looking down at him. “There’s no need to be rude about it, you know. I much prefer Jotun to giant.”

“Technicality.” He drew his sword, grinning. I glanced at my belt, which was distinctly lacking a scabbard and sword.

“Now that’s not fair. You’d attack an unarmed man?”

“Decades of traveling the Nine Worlds and you still don’t carry a sword.” Chuckling, he sheathed his sword as his blond-haired companion behind him rolled his eyes. Holding out his hand to me, he said, “Welcome back, Loki.”

I looked at his hand and then at his face. “What, I’m supposed to let you help me up after you threatened me?”

“A prince always keeps his word.”

“The only word you’ve given me is that you’re going to attack me.”

“What? I welcomed you!”

“Sure you did. After you threatened me.”

Monday, July 23, 2012

Another Story Idea. I have no shame.

My goodness. I've been a horrible person about keeping up, haven't I?

Well, guess what. Camp NaNoWriMo, the National Novel Writing Month event in June and August, is just around the corner. And I'm participating. ^__^ So I'll be super busy in August, though I'll try not to forget you guys again.

Have a synopsis for the novel I'm doing for Camp.

Three princes of Asgard.

A warlord of Jotunheim.

Odin's father is dead, his mother sickening. The Aesir are still young, a fledgling group of gods. And Odin's the one who has to take up his father's mantle, rule Asgard, hold them together.

Across the Worlds in Jotunheim, the frost giants are mobilizing. The power-hungry and revenge-driven frost giant warlord Kassoq, a grandson of Ymir himself, knows that Bor's sons (and a certain flame-haired trickster) are the only things standing between him and Asgard's fall.

Will Asgard survive or will the three winters portending Ragnarok arrive early?

Yes, I'm writing another Norse mythology story. I HAVE NO SHAME.

So we have young Odin. He's about twenty or so, a shameless flirt, and struggling to rule Asgard as well as his father did. He's more powerful magic-wise than either of his brothers, which is the reason Bor chose to pass the throne to him rather than to his older brother.

His brother Honir is the eldest. He's more practical, and overly cautious. His biggest problem is keeping Odin and Loki from doing really stupid/foolhardy things together. He acts as the mentor in this story.

Loki, when he's about Odin's age, is reckless, cocky, and arrogant. He's better at clever tricks than Odin and Honir, but his reckless nature often gets the better of him, landing him in ridiculous scrapes. His philosophy to deal with strange things is to poke it with a stick.

Basically, we have a recipe for disaster.

After this we'll get back to our regularly scheduled content, i.e. Asgard and Olympus and other stuff I desperately need to finish.